Brother, Adur-Raheem Green, you use many words in this introduction to say what is needed to be said. A 23 minute and 21 second primer to your series is unnecessarily lengthy. You even take a break, I believe, around the 14 minute mark. Such times can cause those who see this video alone to not want to view the rest. You speak well, and would do well as a public speaker, but public speaking’s top rule is to know your audience, and with a weaker Ummah that we have nowadays (inshaallah our time is coming to become stronger in faith and conviction), such a long introduction alone would cause some to shun these lessons of great importance. Shorten your lectures, using descriptive language is for reading rather than lecturing unless of course you wish to drive a point, and repetition is to be used sparingly. By sparingly, I mean of course when you want to make something stick out in someone’s mind.
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Brother, Adur-Raheem Green, you use many words in this introduction to say what is needed to be said. A 23 minute and 21 second primer to your series is unnecessarily lengthy. You even take a break, I believe, around the 14 minute mark. Such times can cause those who see this video alone to not want to view the rest. You speak well, and would do well as a public speaker, but public speaking’s top rule is to know your audience, and with a weaker Ummah that we have nowadays (inshaallah our time is coming to become stronger in faith and conviction), such a long introduction alone would cause some to shun these lessons of great importance. Shorten your lectures, using descriptive language is for reading rather than lecturing unless of course you wish to drive a point, and repetition is to be used sparingly. By sparingly, I mean of course when you want to make something stick out in someone’s mind.
Thank you for the consideration of reading this comment.
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